
“Timings all off.”
Jim’s head peaked under the hood of the pickup truck, coughing and sputtering, belching out white smoke. “Could be a crack in the head, too.”
A cigarette clung to chapped lips, the ash ready to fall into the engine compartment. But Jim? He couldn’t be bothered. Eyes closed, he listened.
“Could need a radiator belt. It’s squeakin’, so I ain’t sure if it’s just loose or needs replacing.” Jim slammed down the hood. “There’s an awful lot of work to do here, Bobby Jo.”
He shook his head, readjusting his trucker’s hat. The brim of the hat read JIM’S GARAGE in red lettering. Well, it was red, once upon a time. It had bearing grease stains. Some oil. Some transmission fluid. But most of the stains were sweat. His sister, Dana, unsuccessfully attempted to recoup the hat long enough to wash it. But Jim wasn’t having none of it. This? It was his lucky mechanic’s hat. Every car, every truck, bus, van, convertible, or motorcycle he worked on was while wearing the lucky hat. Nothing bad happened to him when he wore it. Only once did he take it off. That’s the day he almost burned down his garage. That was his only accident in 24 years.
“You buyin’ this truck, Bobby Jo?”
“Maybe.” She crossed her arms, legs crossed, right over left. It looked uncomfortable, not for Bobby Jo. “Maybe I brought it to the best mechanic in the county because I figured you’ns could give me a break on the labor. I know there’s a lot left in this truck. And on this engine.”
Jim took a drag. “You think so?” Jim snickered. “You ain’t no mechanic, B.J., but you know you’re not wrong. Who told she’s got somethin’ left in her? I knows it wasn’t me.”
“Can’t you give me a break, Uncle Jim? I need this truck.”
“You need?” Jim lit another smoke after throwing the other into the gravel. “Or that shiftless boyfriend of yours does.”
“I don’t need this today! I gotta go. Lucy’s at Geena’s, and she doesn’t do well if I ain’t there on time.”
“Geena needs a life,” Jim replied, smoke tendrils rising from his nose. “So do you,” Jim pointed a greasy finger at his niece.” Pulling a red rag from his back pocket, he wiped sweat off his face. “Just hang on a sec.” The driver’s side door, still open, Jim pushed past his niece long enough to turn off the running engine. It coughed and sputtered a few more times before it finally quit. Jim sighed. “C’mon girl. I ain’t got all day.” He pointed to four cars. A black Dodge Durango. A red Corvette Stingray that Bobby Jo thought belonged to Teddy Rossit, the owner of the ‘gentlemen’s club’ on the outskirts of town, and two more, each with out-of-state plates. Jim pointed at the ones waiting to go in the garage. “That one,” he pointed to a newer Ford F-350, “needs an oil change. Probably needs new sparkplugs too, but he ain’t wantin’ that.” Then Jim pointed to the last car, a powder-blue Porsche 911. “And I ain’t too sure what’s wrong with that. It sounds alright – not perfect but good enough, ya know? But the lady who brought it in? She swears the timing is off, the gears ain’t shiftin’ right. Dresses like one of them high falootin’ business types.” He sighed again. “Alright let’s get ya home.”
“Don’t forget about the dog.”
“Tryin’ too.” Climbing into a tow truck, a Chevy with a 454 V8, chains and hooks hanging from the hydrolic boom, Jim asked, “So it’s for him, is it?”
“I don’t want to talk about it.”
“Suit yerself.” Jim lit another cigarette, his last one smoldering in the gravel.
Without another word, Jim shifted the truck into first gear, gravel crunching under the weight of the tires. Groaning and creaking, like an old truck does, knowing the weight of each mile on the road ahead. Bobby Jo sat on the other side of the bucket seat, arms still crossed, teeth clenched, but her eyes? They told a different story. One of hope. Grit. The story of someone not ready to give up just yet.
The sun dipped low behind the hills, casting long shadows across the rusted hoods and busted dreams scattered around Jim’s Garage. But in one moment, the engine humming, highway stretching out ahead, hope felt possible again for Bobby Jo.
Maybe it wasn’t just the truck that had something left in it.
If you’ve ever had a machine that meant more than just metal and bolts—something that carried your stories, your struggles, your second chances—then you know what Bobby Jo’s fighting for.
So what about you? What’s one thing you’d fix, if someone helped out, giving you a chance?
Tell your story.
Or better yet—START YOUR ENGINE!
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